Sunday, February 16, 2014

WK3-Deliverable

- Jah Bless

6 comments:

  1. I like your idea to use both hands and to move objects in front of them after each round, points should get deducted if the player falls over an object.

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  2. Something just looks off with the gradient color scheme. Maybe you could round the edges around the white space to mesh into the border better. The second column has no sub heading. Maybe bold the picture caption.

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  3. Some of the text is a little tight.

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  4. You might want to change the gradient.

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  5. Interesting game concept but the pitch design looks a bit amateur. Space out the font more and work on the background a bit more.

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  6. There is way too much white space , and maybe try to use white background boxes for behind the text, instead of just one big white box. It makes it look like two separate pieces.

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